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05 July 2011 @ 09:55 am
Write on the Money  
You guys know what time it is.....COMMENT FIC!!!!

Let's get it started, Criminal Minds het ships and character pieces. AU, canon, fanon, and all those strange but fun places in between. More than one prompt is great and expect stories in the evening since the man has me on a short leash these days. I'm still in the mood for fun though and I hope you guys are too : )

On your mark get set, go!
I Feel....: uncomfortableuncomfortable
I Hear....: "Knock Three Times" Tony Orlando & Dawn
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SSA McGeek: Jason and Noramcgarrygirl78 on July 5th, 2011 10:07 pm (UTC)
"It's a funny story...its kind of a funny story."

"So are you going to tell it to me?" she asked.


"Well what?" Nora gave him a friendly poke in the belly and it made them both giggle.

It was a rainy Saturday and Jason was home. He was home on his couch with the most amazing woman in the world in his arms. As if he needed more reasons to love the weekend.

"While I come out on top in the end, there are times throughout the story when I dont. They're all funny but still."

"Aww c'mon, I want you to make me laugh Jason."

"I thought I always made you laugh." he looked down at her, kissing her when she puckered up, as if he could help it.

"I want you to make me laugh on purpose." Nora replied.

"Ouch." he cringed. "Cruelty thy name is..."

"Jason Gideon, for pulling me in with the promise of a funny story and then not telling it. I promise to show you mine if you show me yours."

"That's another story altogether." He smiled some, his hand running under her nightshirt to stroke her bare back.


"OK, OK, here it is. We were in Miami on a serial murder case and Hotch and I had to go undercover in a bar."

Nora started laughing.

"What? I havent even gotten to the funny part yet."

"Trust me, yes you have. Keep going."
SSA McGeek: Erin and Dave...say my namemcgarrygirl78 on July 6th, 2011 12:43 am (UTC)
"Mmm, damn baby, damn you are a beautiful woman. I know men probably tell you that all the time."

"Maybe, but I have to admit I like it best when you do."

"How did I get so lucky?"

"I'm kinda lucky too." Erin ran her fingers through his hair. "You give me exactly what I want all the time."

"And when I dont," Dave said. "You know how to put me in my place. Its so damn sexy when you put me in my place."

"I like to bite, Agent Rossi...consider yourself warned."

Dave moaned when she nibbled on his neck. He was still floored by how much this woman turned him on. He'd been with a nice amount of women over the years. He was no Wilt Chamberlain but he'd done his time on the 'so many women, so little time' express.

It seemed like the moment he slipped between Erin's sheets he was a goner. The craziest part for Dave is that he'd been there before and it was hotter the second time around. So much hotter.

"Consider me excited. There's a lot of skin over here, Agent Strauss, where do you want to explore first?"

Grinning, Erin threw the covers over them. There was nothing like a random Thursday playing hooky and just enjoying each other. She would've never thought to do something like this before Dave swept back into her life. Now she was wondering how she lived without it.

"Oh Erin, damn, ohhh baby that's how I like it."

She knew exactly how he liked it and Erin Strauss was an overachiever. She planned to earn her gold star and more this morning.
Clocitymusings on July 6th, 2011 06:29 pm (UTC)
I love how you write Erin. She and Rossi are so good together.
Clocitymusings on July 5th, 2011 07:55 pm (UTC)
If you're done, feel free to say so. I know I'm late. Again.

Hotch/Prentiss: 4th of July picnic

Thicker!family Water balloon fight

Sam/Jessie: Summer days by or in the lake

Rossi/Strauss: You want to what?!

Thicker! Watching fireworks (on the roof?)

Jack "helps" Jessie make a pie.

John/Megan: an Independence Day dance

Morgan/Garcia: Tickling

SSA McGeek: Sam Kassmeyermcgarrygirl78 on July 5th, 2011 07:59 pm (UTC)
I'm not done, havent even started really. I dont mind late comers sometimes : )

Lovely prompts as always and those crazy voices are already buzzing in my head. I can see having a few of these done before bedtime tonight.
SSA McGeek: Erin and Dave....loving someonemcgarrygirl78 on July 5th, 2011 10:40 pm (UTC)
"You want to what?"

"Does it sound outrageous?"

"We need to rewind...I need to hear it again."


"C'mon, you said it once, I know you can say it again. If you want to do it but cant say it that's a little weird."

"Let's get tattoos. There, are you happy now?"

"You want to get matching tattoos? I dont know baby, but it does sound kinda hot. What did you have in mind?"

"Well, since I'm shaky on the idea of marriage I thought we could still get something to commemorate our deep love for and commitment to each other."

"In hot, needled ink, forever, on our skin."

"Oh David please, you have a tattoo."

"I was in the military...we all have tattoos."

"So clearly you have no aversion to them. And they're not against the conduct or dress codes rules of the Bureau as long as they can be hidden by clothing."

"Well that makes this your party." Dave pulled her into his arms and kissed her forehead. "What did you have in mind?"

"Infinity symbols with our initials in between the loops. I thought of our names but..."

"We'll be able to pretend its something else when we break up?" Dave asked, finishing her thought.

"That is not what I was going to say. I just think it might be a jinx."

"I didnt know you believed in that."

"I dont think I do, but I dont want to risk it either."

"So, you want me to tattoo my deep love for and commitment to you somewhere on my body with an infinity symbol?" Dave asked.

"Yes." Erin nodded. "What do you think?"

"I think I'm ready when you are, baby."
Clocitymusings on July 6th, 2011 06:30 pm (UTC)
Lovely. ;)
SSA McGeek: Thicker than Watermcgarrygirl78 on July 6th, 2011 12:21 am (UTC)
"Wow, oh my God, look at the red ones!" Ashley lay there with her mouth wide open.

"Whoa, that is so awesome!" JJ smiled.

"We should do this every year." Penelope said, sitting up to eat more popcorn.

"I have to admit its one of my better ideas." Morgan grinned.

"I concur." Spencer pushed his glasses back up on his face as he focused on the sky.

It was July 4th and the kids climbed up on the roof to see the fireworks. They were going to go to the park but it was such a hot day. Spencer, Ashley, and Penelope were feeling blah. JJ went earlier with Will, his dad, and his aunt but she came back for dinner and fireworks with her family. The older kids were down on the front lawn watching but the view was definitely better from this height.

"If I touched a firework would it burn me?" Ashley asked.

"Seaver, people lose fingers." Morgan replied. "Dont go there."

"It just feels like I can reach out and touch them. That's so awesome."

"Are these your first fireworks?" Penelope asked.

"My mom took me in Bismarck once. I think I was four. It was cool but this..."

"Yeah." JJ nodded.

"Spencer, tell her how you make fireworks." Penelope said. "You'll love this Ashley."

"We'll wait until after the light show for the science lesson." Morgan replied, gently covering the young genius' mouth.

"I was gonna give the abridged version." Spencer reasoned.

"I dont think you've ever given the abridged version of anything." JJ said. "Hey, check out that one. Its red, white, and blue!"

"Cool!" Ashley reached out to touch them knowing they were too far away. But when she was with her new brothers and sisters it felt like anything was possible.
Clocitymusings on July 6th, 2011 06:32 pm (UTC)
That's really wonderful. I love how well Ashley fits into this. What a great night for all of them.
SSA McGeek: Seaver....smilemcgarrygirl78 on July 6th, 2011 06:56 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I gotta admit to having a soft spot for 7 year old Seaver with the rest of the gang. Also, I had/have a story for water balloon fight but it got too big for a comment and really it was just an excuse to write some sexy tiems for Jason and Emily. Hotch cant have all the fun : )