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05 April 2009 @ 07:17 pm
FIC POST: Restless and Breathless, Hotch/Rossi  
I wanna know where the hell my Sunday went.  Ah well, at least I know what I was doing through most of it, brooding and writing.  Always a winning combination *thumbs up*

Title: Restless and Breathless

Author: Montiese

Category: Angst/Drama/PWP

Pairing: Hotch/Rossi

Rating: MATURE

Summary: “I love you madly but you are horrific at dirty talk.”

Author’s Note: I did it…fuck yeah! This is for [info]severity_softly , for being a good friend, a hell of a writer, and an icon maker extraordinaire. She is one of few people who can pull me out my safety box and I never regret the good time, hangover be damned.



The loud clap of thunder followed by the flurry of lightning woke Hotch from what only can be described as a fitful sleep. He turned to the window, watching the rain streak down. Looking up at the ceiling, Hotch put his hand over his chest and felt his heart beating too quickly. He was not alone tonight. Some part of him felt he would look over and see Haley but she wasn’t there, she hadn’t been there in some time. 


When he finally glanced to his right the sleeping form of David Rossi made him smile. He was snoring, as usual, though Dave would never admit to that sort of thing. He didn’t sound like a steam engine, like Hotch’s freshman year roommate, it was more of a loud breathing. That breathing had become a comfort to Hotch these past few months. When Dave first came back to the BAU, for reasons he wanted to keep to himself, Hotch wondered how long it would take for things to happen. 


He was at a vulnerable place in his life and apparently his old friend was too. At first, Hotch avoided him like the plague but Dave had his number. He always had. And here they were. Some days it was like a bad Celine Dion song, others it was perfect. There was no such thing as perfect, Hotch learned that the hard way more times than he cared to recall. So maybe it wasn’t that, maybe it just kept him alive and sane and that was all he could ask of it.


Hotch turned on his side, looking at Dave. He reached out his hand but didn’t touch him. It would be a shame to wake him up. Just because Hotch couldn’t sleep didn’t mean that needed to be inflicted on those around him. His sleeplessness was something else Dave called him on. Unlike everything else, he wasn’t ready to open up to what kept him awake at night.


“You're beautiful when you sleep.” Hotch whispered.


“You're beautiful all the time.” Dave murmured.


“I didn’t mean to wake you. Go back to sleep.”


“You were moving around.”


“I wasn’t.”


“You wanna argue in the middle of the night, Aaron?” Rossi opened his eyes.


“I don’t want to talk at all, actually.”


“That can be arranged.” Dave pulled him close, pressing his mouth against Hotch’s before the younger man could say that wasn’t what he meant at all.


It was hard to argue when Dave kissed him. He was a passionate man and he never hid that away. He was a hot-blooded Italian who made the normally reserved Aaron Hotchner weak in the knees when they touched. Dave moaned, running his fingers through Hotch’s hair.


“What keeps you awake at night?” he whispered when their lips finally came apart.




“Not tonight, Aaron, I mean all the time. Talk to me.”


“I said I didn’t want to talk remember? There are better ways to keep my mouth full.”


“I love you madly but you are horrific at dirty talk.”


Rossi laughed but it turned into a gasp as Hotch made his way under the covers. Anyone who knew Dave intimately knew he was a cock man. He loved having it stroked, petted, and sucked. He loved having it fucked. He was willing to let it be a distraction from something he wanted to get to the bottom of, at least for the time being. It was Saturday morning at about 3:30 after all; how much resistance could he be expected to give? Aaron was one of the best; turning him down was rarely an option.


Dave’s hand found the back of Hotch’s head as he moaned. He liked to talk him through it, the dirtier the better. Dirty talk turned Hotch on…he knew that meant he was doing a good job. Always the overachiever, he wanted Dave to get as nasty as he could. That suited Dave just fine. And when his cock went deep into Aaron’s throat and his voice went up an octave as he called Aaron his sweet thing, Hotch knew he was victorious. He swallowed every drop, had from the very first time, and then kissed Dave breathless.


“Damn,” Dave pulled down Aaron’s pajama pants. “It’s too late for this.”


“For what?” Hotch asked, kissing him again as his back hit the mattress. “We don’t have to get up in the morning.”


“I think that might be the first time I ever heard you say that.”


“I can still surprise you.”


“I like you just fine, no surprises required. In fact I like that I know everything that is getting ready to happen.”


Hotch shivered as Dave teased his ass. He was already hard, ready to go; there was no need for the opening act. Getting Dave off always drove him to the brink. Dave fucking him took him right over the edge.


“Then why don’t you get to it.” Hotch grabbed the lube from the nightstand. “I don’t want to wait.”


“Patience, young one,” Dave leaned to kiss his nose. “Has never been your strong suit.”


There would be other nights when Dave could get down to the bottom of what troubled Hotch. There were so many layers to work through and the years apart saw walls built as well. He still held back on Dave, though never when they were intimate, and certainly never in bed. Just when the veteran Agent thought everything had been revealed, a secret wall came into his line of vision. Hotch was so alluring, so sensual, so damn addictive; there were things Dave was willing to wait to see and hear. In the meantime, he would satisfy his other three senses until they went into overload.



I'm In....: the lair
I Feel....: ecstaticecstatic
I Hear....: 100 Greatest Hard Rock Songs
Helium Raven: cm - h/rossi have historyseverity_softly on April 6th, 2009 12:12 am (UTC)
EeeeeeeeYAAAAAAAAAY! You wrote slash! You didn't even have to write porn either, and you did!

And here they were. Some days it was like a bad Celine Dion song, others it was perfect.

That line made me giggle so much! <3

“You wanna argue in the middle of the night, Aaron?”

*G* And I can SO hear Dave saying this.

Thank you so much, my dear! YOU ROCK! *squishes you*
SSA McGeek: Rossi....yo baby whats upmcgarrygirl78 on April 6th, 2009 12:41 am (UTC)
Well firstly, these two have porn written all over them. I see them both as such sexual beings, and since I felt uncomfortable as a newbie I went to the one place I knew they would be comfortable...in bed.

I am so glad you like it, I actually really like it. And I broke another barrier, at least in this fandom. Woo-hoo!!!!!
Jax: Creator of Paper Memories: cm // morgan rossi HAI NOMS!elekanahmen on April 6th, 2009 01:08 am (UTC)




you go girl.
SSA McGeek: Hotch....gigglymcgarrygirl78 on April 6th, 2009 02:17 am (UTC)
*dances happily*

I am honestly thinking about writing more. I dont know, we'll see where it takes me, but I love Hotch and Rossi as characters, and they are kinda sexy. It was an adventure.
moonflower75moonflower75 on April 10th, 2009 10:46 pm (UTC)
Oh my! I am reduced to a puddle of goo!

I love it, it might be a small scene but it packs a lot, and if you want to write more of this pairing, by all means, please do! :)
love these lines in particular:

"“You're beautiful when you sleep.” Hotch whispered.

“You're beautiful all the time.” Dave murmured."

I consider myself very lucky, because yours is only the second story I read with this pairing and in both cases I enjoyed a great fic written by a very talented author,
thank you so much for sharing

SSA McGeek: Rossi....Mr. Seriousmcgarrygirl78 on April 10th, 2009 11:07 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you like it, they are a new pairing for me so all the kind words are so appreciated. Expect more in the future....I dont know how much more but something surely.

Also, I noticed you friended me. At the moment, I am not adding anyone new to my friends list but any fic posted will be public or easily accessible at bau_inbox.
moonflower75moonflower75 on April 11th, 2009 06:24 am (UTC)
No problem, I don't mind if you do not add me, it's your friends' list:you decide who's there and who's not :)

it is basically for me to be able to 'see' if you write anything new...and go read it as promptly as possible because I am very interested :) but if you have a problem with me adding you, please let me know and I will remove you, no hard feelings.

I am pretty new around LJs (and I think it shows clearly :>) and I don't know: shall I send a message asking 'permission' before adding someone to my friends list or not?
Any help on this would be appreciated a lot! :D
SSA McGeekmcgarrygirl78 on April 11th, 2009 02:02 pm (UTC)
I did that when I was new. I would comment in their journal or on their story and ask if I could add them. Just adding without them knowing you is weird because there are spambots and all kinds of stuff and people just dont know what the intent is on a strange add.
moonflower75moonflower75 on April 11th, 2009 06:42 pm (UTC)
thank you kindly! I'll be sure to do that from now on.
I apologize if I weirded you out by adding you unannounced, it was really just ignorance on my part, and if you wish for me to undo it, please, just let me know.
SSA McGeek: Emily....greenmcgarrygirl78 on April 11th, 2009 06:51 pm (UTC)
I would appreciate it. But please feel free to come into public posts or in comms and speak up, I like getting to know people but dont friend people until I do.
stellarystellary on July 22nd, 2009 04:05 pm (UTC)
because i couldn't pass a Hotch/Rossi fic and not leave a review. yeah.

please write moar. there's a seriously lack of Hotch/Rossi-ness in this universe.
SSA McGeek: Hotch and Rossi....shades of justicemcgarrygirl78 on July 22nd, 2009 05:07 pm (UTC)
I think I have 2 or three more at my writing comm, lairofthemuses. Check them out. I am just a Hotch/Rossi dabbler but I do find them to be a fascinating pairing. Thanks for taking the time to review : )
Linda FutrellLinda Futrell on November 11th, 2013 04:45 pm (UTC)
hot story. would like more