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18 September 2008 @ 09:38 pm
FIC POST  
I've done it.....my first stand-alone JJ/Rossi fic.  This has been in the works awhile but I feel really accomplished now that I've done it.  As far as I'm concerned this coupling has much potential and we'll see what happens for them in the future.  Whoever reads this, I would love feedback.  Should I stop while I'm ahead or run head first into a wall?

Title: Buddies
Author: Montiese
Category: Romance
Pairing: JJ/Rossi
Rating: TEEN
Summary: “Let’s have a cuddle.”
Author’s Note: this is for hopskotch_hotch  . We talked about it and I've finally gotten the two of them alone.

She woke to the smell of coffee.  She smelled coffee, heavy rain, and the scent of that man all over her sheets.  Woke was probably too strong of a word.  She actually just opened her eyes and glanced at the alarm clock before wondering how much extra sleep would be possible.  The baby was still on a typical baby’s schedule.  JJ had only been in bed an hour or so after an early morning feeding.

 

“Is that coffee for me?” she asked, focusing on the well-built man standing in her doorway.

 

“Mmm hmm…hazelnut, no cream, and three Splenda.  Do you want it?”

 

“That better be a rhetorical question.  Get over here.”

 

David Rossi put the coffee on the nightstand.  He sat on the edge of the bed, leaned over, and placed a chaste kiss on her lips.  JJ smiled, wrapping her arms around him and deepening the kiss.

 

“JJ…”

 

“What?”

 

“It’s…”

 

“Get back in bed.”

 

“What?”

 

They were still kissing so it was hard to comprehend what she said.

 

“Get in here, David.” She pushed back the blankets.  “I'm still naked and I want you that way too.”

 

Dave wiggled his eyebrows and JJ laughed.  She slid over on the mattress, feeling something strange in the pit of her stomach when she thought of it as his side.  He got in, holding her in his arms.

 

“I'm here,” he said, the tee shirt coming over his head.  “Now what?”

 

“Lets have a cuddle.” She replied as she wrapped her body around him.

 

She could keep Dave warmer than any blanket could.  It had been a long time since he felt so relaxed with a woman.  He and Susan, wife #3, called it quits almost ten years ago.  Since then, David Rossi preferred the ‘get in and get out’ approach to relationships.  Even using the word relationship made it more than what it usually was.  A succession of women for the purposes of carnal bliss was more like it. 

 

Dave was a whore and it did not bother him one bit.  As long as everyone knew what they were getting into, things worked out fine.  Sex was sex and then he could focus on what made him happy…his dog, fishing, and writing.  Now that he was back in the BAU he had even less time for those things.  No one was more surprised than he was to fall for Jennifer Jarreau.

 

“What's on your mind?” she ran her hand over his chest.

 

“You.” it was the truth.  Not the whole truth, but enough of it.

 

“Tell me what you're thinking.”

 

“You tell me…you're the profiler.”

 

“I'm not a profiler.” JJ tilted her chin and kissed him.

 

Rossi turned his body, resting her on her back.  She opened herself to him immediately, starting with her thighs.  Dave could hardly control the feelings stirring in his soul.  What was this woman doing to him?

 

“You promised to tell me one day why you didn’t go all the way.” He said.

 

“I go all the way and then some, David Rossi.” She said, pulling him on top of her.

 

“Cute.  Seriously though…”

 

“We have so much time to talk.  Right now words are the last thing on my mind.”

 

How would she react when he told her that he wanted to be more than a fuck buddy?  He wanted to move within her walls, possibly hang his hat there.  Oh God, did he want to settle down?  No, no, no, rebound was the name of the game.  They liked each other as people but as soon as JJ broke up with Will, Dave noticed that he became more interesting to her. 

 

She finally accepted one of his million dinner invitations.  Dave was so shocked he was unable to get a reservation in time.  Cooking for her was more impressive anyway.  That was almost five months ago.

 

JJ arched her back when he touched her.  The man had magical hands, magical everything.  She never quivered, trembled, or climaxed like she did with Dave.  The first time, they held off until their third date, she literally thought she would die.  Sweat, tears, and nirvana…it was a moving experience.  She did not tell Dave what he did to her between the sheets.  The man didn’t need any more reason to be an egomaniac.  Of course, in his defense, if she could do that she would strut around like a peacock too.

 

“I kinda like you baby.” He quoted Steve Perry as he thrust against her.

 

“Feels like a lot more than like.”

 

“We’re really going to be late…you still have to get Anna up and ready.” He smiled when she groaned, covering her ears.  “Besides, I think you're getting addicted to all of this man.  We might have to put you on a ration system.”

 

“Oh please.  Get off me.” JJ laughed, pushing him onto the mattress.

 

Dave laughed too.  He pushed the blanket away, exposing her glorious body to full view.  Moving her legs apart with little effort, he placed the sweetest kiss on her most intimate place.

 

“Looks as if I am not the only one who needs rations.” JJ said, pretending she was not flustered.

 

Rossi grinned, sitting on the edge of the bed.

 

“You should drink that coffee.  I’ll get in the shower.”

 

He could not see JJ behind him nodding.  She bounced up, always full of energy, and wrapped her arms around him.  He loved the feeling of her breasts pressed on his back.  The reason why was unknown to him.  She pressed a kiss behind his ear, then another.

 

“What's that for?” he asked.

 

“Because I felt like it.”

 

“Yes ma'am.” His hands covered hers.  “JJ?”

 

“Hmm?”

 

“I've been thinking about something.  I think we…”

 

Crying came through the baby monitor.  Now the morning had begun.  JJ climbed off the bed, kissing David’s cheek and throwing on his tee shirt.

 

“Hold that thought, OK.”

 

Dave sighed.  He went into the bathroom knowing he would hold it for a good while.  He owed Anna a big kiss for saving him from making an ass of himself.

 

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spence_reidspence_reid on September 19th, 2008 02:41 am (UTC)
For some reason I just can't see the whole JJ-Rossi thing, but in your capable hands, it almost seems like a good idea. : )
SSA McGeek: Writermcgarrygirl78 on September 19th, 2008 11:04 am (UTC)
I'm glad you read it, thank you. Its just something I am tinkering with in an effort to spread my wings. I really do think they have chemistry, and I would like to think even if they didnt, I could give them some : )

We'll see if more comes or not, I have to admit, they have not reached supercouple status or anything but it would be fun to see a few more moments in their "relationship", at least for me anyway.
hopskotch_hotch on September 19th, 2008 12:15 pm (UTC)
How did I miss this post before now? I was looking out for it, but I think sleep got the better of me.

I agree completely with spence, you make Rossi/JJ seem like a good idea...but then I've always thought it was a good idea ;)

So, I love this! I was wondering what time points you'd use, and now, JJ having had the baby and broken up with Will makes sense. A lot of sense. Rossi is definitely developed here, which makes it a very nice Rossi fic, as well as it being JJ/Rossi. You wound together the various bits and pieces of his background and personality - his love of simple things like his dog and writing; his unashamed dealings with women since his last divorce. Somehow it makes him more human, more lovable. You and I spoke before about how JJ's character is tough to grasp with so little to go on, but I can see her allowing herself to get emotionally attached to someone like Dave - an older man who still has a fair bit of spark in him. It's fun to see things change for him - is he thinking she could finally be the one he could settle with? Did he have a 'type' before her, and does she break that mold?

This begs for more to follow! :)

SSA McGeekmcgarrygirl78 on September 19th, 2008 12:59 pm (UTC)
He likes blondes.....he is definitely cliched that way. Young, bubbly, vivacious, but smart and hard to handle too. Rossi doesnt want a bobblehead for a woman, he likes someone who challenges him and even drives him out of his mind....minus the drama of course. Drama sends him right for the door.

I think he and JJ would have an esasygoing relationship because neither one of them would take it seriously and then one day it would be more. A little time apart, Dave going on a speaking tour or JJ taking time off to spend with her daughter, and BAM, they realize that spending time with the other person is about more than really good food and even better sex.

How would they be different from H/P though. I have to try and figure out their ticks, hangups, and the like. Something to think about this weekend. Deep down though I think Rossi is a romantic, its the Italian blood. And JJ wants a man who will be very alpha male, probably like her father was, but be man enough and modern enough to be comfortable in her doing her own thing. Tough combination but I think Dave fits perfectly.
Helium Raven: cm - cm_exchange reid!santaseverity_softly on September 25th, 2008 11:38 am (UTC)
Hi Mcgarrygirl78,

Sorry for the OT comment to your fic (I didn't see an unlocked non-fic post to comment to). We still haven't heard back from you on your cm_exchange assignment, and we were wanting to hear back from everyone today. I know this could very well be as simple as an email glitch, so I've re-sent the email with the assignment to you. Could you please email us back (or comment to me here) to let us know that you have received your assignment, read the email, and that everything looks in order with your request?

THANK YOU!
SSA McGeek: Em and Hotchmcgarrygirl78 on September 25th, 2008 12:50 pm (UTC)
Yep, I got it.....sorry for the delay, the week has been kinda insane. Thanks for popping in because I surely would have intended to, and forgotten to, contact you guys today.
Helium Raven: cm - prentiss smilingseverity_softly on September 25th, 2008 12:53 pm (UTC)
No problem! Thanks!
stormcloud on November 6th, 2008 09:56 pm (UTC)
Wow... I am a die hard Hotch/JJ shipper, but you made this pairing really fun to read and you have made me really think about them as a couple!! You said this was your first stand-alone, have you written other CM fics with this pairing involved?
SSA McGeek: JJ and Rossi....you amuse memcgarrygirl78 on November 6th, 2008 10:02 pm (UTC)
I have. You can go over to hotch_prentiss and see them in my H/P fic. I dont know if you want to go there, being a JJ/Hotch shipper and all but if you want to, check out The Grove (its in 5 parts), Heat, and Make it Last All Night (2 parts).

The Grove and Make it Last All Night are AU and I've actually written the BAU profilers as teenagers. That might not be your cup of tea but it heavily features JJ/Rossi so I thought I might mention them.
Helium Ravenseverity_softly on March 6th, 2009 12:56 am (UTC)
LOL--I saw m comment above and thought, 'wtf, I read this before?!' Of course, I hadn't. :P

Poor Dave. He needs snuggles, and he needs to be told he's a catch for more than just his prowess.

This is sweet!
SSA McGeek: Criminal Mindsmcgarrygirl78 on March 6th, 2009 01:10 am (UTC)
Thanks. I keep meaning to write more of this pairing but I get distracted easily : )
Anneklok: [jj] sweet and sexysecondheartbeat on December 21st, 2009 10:57 pm (UTC)
Of course, in his defense, if she could do that she would strut around like a peacock too.

L O L. I loved that.

I don't think it was all that lame. Not your best, but you know.
SSA McGeek: Paget and AJmcgarrygirl78 on December 21st, 2009 11:21 pm (UTC)
Definitely not my best but I went back and read my first H/P a while back and I wasnt that impressed either....they definitely got better.

I'm glad you read it though : )
Anneklok: [megan fox] smoochiesecondheartbeat on December 21st, 2009 11:43 pm (UTC)
Just needed a little fix. Like a crackhead, but less gross and whorey.